Renga wrapup

Thank you to all who joined us Tuesday and Wednesday for renga!  Here is what we created:


Rain applauds the sun
rising angrily alone
while thunder grumbles.

Beneath mulberry
umbrellas, rabbits listen,
nibble, listen, run

Run from thunder, run!
Lightning blazing, where to hide?
The harsh noise sees all.

as the storm withdraws
noses lift to smell the air
a rainbow awakes

Fox breathes patiently;
unwitting breakfast beckons
a shadow, a tail

Shining crystal orb
runs slowly over new green
the leaf is now dry

Iridescent fall
Of drops splash open flowers
Of white, purple, gold.

Chocolate fox
Dances, pounces, feasts
A robin bathes.

Pumpkin hill churches
ensconce waking worms in squash.
Robin’s eyes flash. Flight.

We’ll have to try that again!  Now, does anyone have any title suggestions?

6 Responses to Renga wrapup

  1. Angelique says:

    Snapshot of Dawn?

  2. spyscribbler says:

    That’s so cool! That was definitely fun!

  3. onipar says:

    I’m published! 😉

  4. JLB says:

    Angelique, dig it!

    Spy, we’re definitely trying that again next week!

    Oni, do tell!

  5. onipar says:

    Sorry. I was joking around. I meant the renga you posted 😛

  6. JLB says:

    Oni, sorry! I guess I can be a bit slow on the uptake sometimes! 😉

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